Friday, January 13, 2012

Crouching Tiger, Hidden Haiku

The wounded diver
Screaming hard with all his might
No sound, mere bubbles


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This is a response to my previous haiku from another user on a site I frequent :) (Not my work)


Here is my reply:


Sinking down, he sees
a light. Is it the sun? Or....
Soon enough, he'll know.

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